Open 2025 Stories - Mehreen Ahmed
Flamenco
By Mehreen Ahmed
In the realm of the Djinn, warmth emanated from apples. Apples were big fireballs that grew on smoky trees whose size, shape, or colour never changed. Djinns, who looked like glowing strings, treated these apples as a display in the magnificent orchard and never ate them because fire was the stuff of life in this realm.
Wild stallions ran on open russet plains, where a river of lava flowed
from charred mountains and formed a valley. Djinns called it the Valley
of the Red. They ensconced in this valley to soak up the fire released
from the lava.
Down by the Valley of the Red, another realm existed. This was a more
verdant realm, unlike the red lands of the Djinn. Djinns frequented this
realm out of curiosity, to learn more about the inhabitants. Djinns had
an insatiable desire to learn and absorb.
While Djinns lived for thousands of years, Mortals of the other realm
were transitory. Djinns speculated whether or not Mortals metamorphosed
in death and became Djinn at any point in time. Conversely, were the Djinns,
Mortals at any point in time?
Djinns knew about mortality; they were the fine infinite fire creatures,
who were deemed to be superior to any other transients. Occasionally,
they also burnt out, but that was when they bathed in the Valley of the
Red to get regenerated.
One fine afternoon, Djinn Aggi sat steeped in the Valley of the Red when
a firefly flew in from the realm of the Mortals. It whispered news that
the Flamenco cave dance would be performed in the verdant mountains of
Sacramento.
The dancer was a young Romani girl called Drina. Aggi knew many tales
about the persecution for hundreds of years. Romani men, women, and children
being slaughtered, many fled to exile themselves as they moved from one
place to another without ever settling anywhere, known as the nomads.
Aggi frequented the Flamenco dance. Although the Djinn saw it all on its
timeline when the persecution happened thousands of years ago, viewing
it in art form, gave a new perspective; it made the history of suffering
even more poignant, and sublime. He asked the firefly to make a magic
potion yet again and turn it into a Romani boy.
The firefly had that power, but only to transform the Djinn for twenty-four
hours. After that, it would revert into a fire creature that it originally
was. In these twenty-four hours, it would have a Mortal heart, a nose,
eyes, and an image in a male body with a full range of Mortal emotions,
however, he would still, retain some Djinn powers.
The Djinn boy would be able to fly across realms. The magic enabled it
to become Mortal once every month in the Djinn calendar. The Djinn was
accustomed to visiting ancient places, customs, and cultures thousands
of years old. It had seen and known many kings, and events; he knew the
underworld.
In the realm of the Mortals, a cave was replete yet again, with Flamenco
musicians and dancers. A young Romani girl, Drina was on the floor. The
dance ensued as her musicians clapped, and sang. Songs rose to a crescendo.
Drina looked at her audience in the dimly lit cave fire. There was one
that caught her attention. He was a redhead, wrapped up in a robe.
Unlike the others, his eyes were red. Drina smiled at him and he smiled
back. Aggi felt a strange passion rising. This particular transformation
enlightened it of Mortal passion—to feel what they feel. Why and
how did love feel? That mortal could even die for love. He never felt
this previously when he visited the realm of the Mortals.
Imparting a Flamenco story was crucial for Drina—one of persecution.
The fiery dance rekindled an age-old, story. The spirited dancer had been
longing to tell her rendition to an audience. As the dance ensued, her
eyes spoke, her bosom heaved, and her footsteps tapped the cave floor
in a show of a feisty desire to erase this history; all that was too painful
to endure.
She danced by a slow fire inside the cave with the accompaniment of musical
instruments. A fire burned within her; since the inception of this race,
this ancient dance was carried out through many generations of her tribe.
This evening, she decided what instruments, she wanted to dance to, tambourines,
bells, or castanets. She chose them all. Her red skirt swished and swirled
wildly around. With every tap, thousands of defiant embers sparked off
the floor.
Hands above her head, he parted her long dance fingers and pointed them
toward the cave walls, lit up with etches of slaughter, of being devoured
by mythical creatures on the wasteland who were her ancestors. Romantic
Ronda—the Romani dancer carried the memory of this beautiful place
in her heart, bore it all, and relived the story of the beheading of the
Gitanos by the Rulers of the kingdom.
Her dance revealed it through the whine of her waistline art, while she
suppressed a cry when she thought of men and women thrown into the deep
La Yecla gorge. Until she could not dance anymore; until the all-consuming
fire, consumed her. The dancer fell on the floor. In the light of the
fire, before everyone, Aggi felt a pain he never felt before, her pain
was his pain as he saw this dance of Romani persecution.
Drina looked at him and she transmitted love to him; his red eye was captivating.
The young, spirited Aggi, made up his mind that very moment to transport
them both to the realm of the White where they could woo each other. The
realm of the Djinn was too hot for Drina, she would melt in seconds. The
Mortal world was beset with the dangers of persecution.
The only one world open for them was to travel into the realm of White
where both could be safe. He felt love in his heart for this woman, he
wanted to take her away. He knew what he needed to know about Mortals,
which was enough for him. He came forward to make her free and happy again.
Aggi lifted her body and shifted her into a realm of White. Light as a
feather, she looked down and smiled upon those, still eyeing her; she
burned in the enigma of this crowning point of love for the world to note,
to remember all that was too painful for her to ignore. What she endured
for thousands of years; in this dreadful paradox of art, fame was earned
through the sadness of the esteemed Flamenco dance.
In the realm of White, the sphere was dominated by light. Aggi had entered
this realm before when the firefly performed the magic on the Djinn land.
He had travelled through a portal that had opened before his eyes. In
this domain of the lights, and breathing the same air, the Mortals floated
in the ether. Aggi felt ethereal, too since, the magic could not revert
him into full-fire Djinn for twenty-four hours.
When both were traveling to this realm of White, Drina fell asleep. As
she woke up, she found her hand, in hand, and entwined into Aggi’s
like an ivy vine. He kissed her and they made love under a profusion of
white flowers, Drina saw that these flowers secreted sweet nectar, and
pollen grains, Drina touched the nectar mesmerized before Aggi could stop
her.
She was in his lap. Aggi was cognisant of the impact of the nectar on
Mortals. Mortals were allowed to breathe in the realm of the White, but
only if they didn’t’t touch anything was the only constraint.
He stood up and before anything could happen to her, Aggi attempted to
take Drina out of the realm of White.
“What is this?” Drina asked.
“What is what?” Aggi answered.
“Why do I fade?” Drina asked.
“Because, you aren’t allowed to touch any flowers, or the
nectar, here.”
“But I breathed the pollen. Why have you brought me here? What is
this place?”
“Without pollen, Mortals couldn’t’t breathe here, however,
the nectar has ingredients to turn a Mortal into light in twenty-four
hours.”
“How do you know so much?”
“Should I have told you?”
“Tell me what?”
“That I’m a Djinn turned Mortal?”
“What?”
Drina fainted after that.
Aggi realized that only a couple of hours were left until he too turned
into full Djinn and Drina faded into full light. He ran to the brink of
the realm of White and flew them back into the realm of Mortals. He lay
her down in a forest and her form returned. She opened her eyes and smiled
at Aggi. She caressed his face and kissed his forehead and his lips.
“I can be here for another half an hour.”
“Must you return?” she asked.
“Yes, I must but I can meet you once in Djinn calendar month.”
“Take me with you, Djinn Aggi, I do not wish to be without you.”
“I don’t know how.”
“Find a place where I shall not melt. You shall not be fire. We
can be one entity.”
Aggi thought fast before his time ran out. His Mortal facade was coming
off, the heat was rising from his body and was visible. Clouds gathered.
The sky cracked up and the firefly came down towards them. It could have
a solution, another magic potion to turn them both into one entity. And
for eternity?
The firefly found them and flew around them. Drina and Aggi continued
to look for a solution. In the realm of the Mortals, neither Aggi nor
Drina knew how to live together in peace, nor communicate with her people
about his magical existence.
Drina had only to touch the nectar in the realm of White, not even taste
it, she had begun to fade into light. Firefly whispered of a fourth realm,
the realm of Time where they could both be the same entity, eternally.
Before firefly could tell them about the catch in the realm of Time, they
became euphoric and, they were so engrossed in kissing each other that
the catch eluded them until Aggi’s body heated up, his newfound
skin pores began to emit puny balls of fire. ‘What’is this?’
Drina asked surprised. She was still in full Mortal form, but Aggi was
changing and disintegrating. One whom she fell in love with, the redhead
and the red-eyed boy, who brought her up into the realm of White and saved
her from the sharp incisive lights cutting her up until she faded.
Beads of sweat appeared on Aggi’s body. He began to pulverize. His
body was on fire and his skin was flaking off. Something to do with the
transformation, Drina reasoned. What would she turn into? Where could
she go? Aggi was becoming a Djinn again.
The firefly turned back and forth until Aggi became full fire. But another
transformation occurred. Aggi was now turning into ash. He lay before
Drina in an inanimate heap of ash.
“What happened?” Drina began to cry. She didn’t’t
care; she wanted Aggi to be Djinn again. Let him live. In the realm of
Time, Aggi and Drina could be one entity but only as ash and dirt where
each would absorb the other in time. That was the catch. Reverting to
a Djinn, Aggi’s mortal body shed and became ash under the new magic
potion for the Realm of Time.
Her thousand years of tears came undone. Tears of persecution, and love
for Aggi the Djinn, flowed unhindered. She collected Aggi’s ash
and placed it on her lap in the forest before the firefly. The firefly
saw her pain, the depth of her love for the flame Aggi once was.
The firefly cupped her tears in hollyhocks and poured it over the ash.
The ash began to stir, and it started to rise like a fire twister. In
the twister, Drina saw a flame, flying and breathing again. Djinn cooled
down and found the strength to stand, bodily back; both breathed the same
air on the realm of Mortals.
A metamorphosis had occurred here, in the realm of Mortals, a miracle
allowed them to be together as they both desired. They took each other’s
hand; hand in hand, Drina and Aggi walked abreast towards the edge of
the realm of Mortals. Then they stopped. They stood spellbound as they
watched the fretful firefly, turning into a gaseous mass, dissipating
into a star.
Mehreen Ahmed is Bangladeshi-born Australian novelist. She has published ten books to date and works in Litro, BlazeVox, Chiron Review, Centaur Literature. While her novels have been acclaimed by Midwest Book Review, Drunken Druid Editor's Choice, shorts have won contests, Pushcart, James Tait, and five botN nominations. |
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